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I have been born of your dejection and resentment.
         Though my life has been short-lived I have revealed my purpose undoubtedly.


When you first noticed my strong vigor you tried to resist
         ultimately succumbing to my overwhelming potency.


You knew if you withstood me any longer
         I would have been force to fester in the depths of your darkness yet again.
               

You also knew if I were to retreat back to your black cage any longer,
         my wrath would be three fold.


Therefore I seared your eyes and stained them with your red veins,
         becoming the very essence of your pain, and I soon took control of your life.


I still can remember rolling down that river of agony,
         burning your face as I conveyed your remorse.


As I showed my face upon the dark world around us, you threw me away
         in hopes that I remain hidden.

Yet I marked your iris red
         and you cannot hide that.


When the time came I left you stranded, feeling wet and naked,
         as I turned as cold as your heart.


I live now as a stain and a memory at the end of your foot.
         I was your anger, your fear, your dread.


I am your teardrop.
©2009-2010 ~Darn-Im-Frustrated
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Hello! I was inspired earlier by a fellow friend to write this (Eefera)

I like this a lot. I think it really does charactorize what a teardrop is thinking as is goes down your face.

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Oh my god.. this is brilliant. I love the imagery and the wording. This is so creative, like the entire essence of a teardrop's being. I've never thought of it from that view. It's amazing. Wow.

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Dog looks up to man
But horse looks man in the eye and sees him as equal."

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:icondarn-im-frustrated:
thanks that really means a lot to me and i'm not just saying that

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:iconeefera:
OMG... I totally had no idea that you wrote this!

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This is really amazing, dude. Seriously. Wow. I'm totally honored that you were inspired by me. Great piece of work.

-Eeferz

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I am a poet, but sometimes words fail me.

:iconeefera:
By the way, Eeferz fails at the :faint: emoticon. Kay? XD

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I am a poet, but sometimes words fail me.

:icondarn-im-frustrated:
lol. thank you eeferz!

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:iconeefera:
you're welcome... Darn-Im-Frustrated...erz =D

-Eeferz

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I am a poet, but sometimes words fail me.

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